The Distance- Chapter 1- Draft
Something I have been working on, thought I would get some criticism on my first draft, beginning of chapter 1. Thank you for your time.
I dream of reaching people all over the world and knowing them through word, as I share me the same way. I was born in Maine, but the Navy has taken me across the country, to Asia, and back again. I have met so many great and wonderful people. I hope to continue doing so.