This story was recently rejected for publication, and I would like to understand more about why it was. Please let me know why you would have rejected this story.
I am writing part time while I continue to work. I have been a writer since I could scrawl words on a page, but never had the right set of circumstances in which to pursue that truth about me. Now, I do.
What I really hope to find here is negative feedback--criticism, harsh but true, that will help me be a better writer.
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